Hi there, Kristian here,
This week for writing we are learning how to write a piece of persuasive writing.
My ones about Kids should get paid to go to school.
Hope you enjoy it!
Reason 1: we work hard to finish our work and what do we get?
more work! this is outrageous and also very tiring!
Reason 2: Kids can't get jobs!
kids can't work on construction sites or as butcher
and stuff like that. so they can't get the opportunity to get money.
Reason 3: Some kids don't even have uniforms!
For example, some kids go to school without uniforms.
So we should at least give them some money
so they can buy uniforms.
In conclusion I think kids should get paid to go to school.
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